Talk:Eurovision: Come Together/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:17, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Reviewing for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 13:17, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "19 previous Eurovision entries," - don't begin a sentence with a digit per MOS:NUMNOTES
  • "contested the event," - try to use an alternative word other than "event"

Background

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  • "a look at what would have been in 2020." - this portion of text closely resembles that of the BBC source that verifies it. It will need rewriting to pass WP:LIMITED
  • "official replacement programme to the 2020 Eurovision Song Contest," - 2020 edition,
  • "and broadcast live from Hilversum on 16 May 2020," - the source does not mention it occurred in Hilversum. Another source is needed to verify this fact
  • "instead via the BBC iPlayer." - through BBC iPlayer
  • Wikilink Graham Norton
  • "This press release also confirmed that Eurovision: Come Together would give viewers the opportunity to take part in a live vote." - needs a reliable source at the end of this to verify that it is correct

Selection process

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  • "all songs from the contest pre-2020." - before 2020.
  • "were not eligible." - ineligible
  • "Panellists was asked to choose ten Eurovision songs" - select

Participants

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  • "and each account holder was able to cast a vote up to three times." - cast up to three votes.
  • "of the live show, and the top 10 results were announced via the BBC website following the show." - close repetition of "show"
  • Each one of the table's columns should include "scope="col" per MOS:DTT
  • All of the artist names in the artist column should be put into the Template:sortname template

References

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  • Reference 2 is linked to the incorrect article from the BBC
  • Reference 16 is missing the publication date
  • The Guardian is the work not the publisher

The review shall be put on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the suggestions raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:03, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Sims2aholic8: Are you going to make the changes or do you need some help? Grk1011 (talk) 17:22, 12 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
@MWright96: I went ahead and made the changes. Please let me know if you see any other issues. Thanks for your patience! Grk1011 (talk) 14:07, 15 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:26, 15 October 2020 (UTC)Reply