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Reviewer: 1.02 editor (talk · contribs) 09:39, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll take this review, expect comments within a few days 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 09:39, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
Review
edit- It is mentioned in the lead that the line at its fullest extent, ran between X and Y. When was this 'fullest extent' achieved or was there a shorter route?
- I hope that this clarifies it. "With passenger service over, the remainder of the line between South Side Crossing and Cooper Avenue became exclusively used for freight"--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:04, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- infobox picture- which one is the branch?
- I hope that I clarified it. --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:09, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- The etymology section is a bit vague, some timeframes would help clarify.
- I did the best I could concerning the name change to Evergreen. I looked in the Brooklyn Daily Eagle for the first mention of the commnity of Evergreen, and this is what I found.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:42, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- route description- overly vivid description here, please cut down on things that is not the line (eg: depots, sidings...)
Done
- "The origin of the......on 26 March, 1874, to build [what?] from Quay street...
Done
- "the lines construction would have necessitated the closure of the Evergreen branch". Why?
Done
- "on February 9, 8 pieces of track..." how much is that?
Done
- traces of the line- is this necessary? Sounds like trivia which is discouraged.
Done
hold
editI have finished reviewing the article and have identified some issues, and you'll have 7 days to address these issues. Thanks. 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 11:16, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
- All the issues have been addressed and i am satisfied with the current state of the article. Passing. 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 00:32, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
- @1.02 editor: You didn't mark the article as passing yet.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 20:24, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
Map
edit@BMACS1002: Thanks for adding the map, though it should only be to Cooper Avenue. Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:41, 18 September 2022 (UTC)