Talk:Every Mother Counts 2012/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:50, 18 January 2017 (UTC)

Initial comments

• An alt description is required for the album cover

Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

• Any information on the producer?

Not from the sources I came across. The album's liner notes may have more detail, but I don't have access to them (I even checked my local library system's collection). ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

• In the lead, should you mention that six of the tracks included were previously released?

• Usually album descriptions note previously unreleased tracks, as there's nothing really special about tracks folks have already had access to before. I think this detail belongs in the article's prose, but not the lead. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

• I could be wrong about this, but I don't think a comma belongs after "live rendition of "Sister" by Dave Matthews Band"; and, should ", respectively." be placed after "Sting's previously available song."?

• I think the comma was added by a Guild of Copy Editors reviewer. Perhaps the sentence is more grammatically correct with the comma, but since you and I both think it isn't necessary, I'll go ahead and remove. I also added "respectively". ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

• "Corinna, Corrina" should link to "Corrine, Corrina"

• Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

• Reference #1 - Link to AllMusic

• Done. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

ON HOLD – Yes, yes, yes. Another good article! Ping me when you're done. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 00:35, 19 January 2017 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Thank you for reviewing. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 00:45, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

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