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Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kncny11 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kncny11 (talk · contribs) 16:13, 6 April 2021 (UTC)Reply


I'm gonna be sniping this one because I love this show. Hopefully it shouldn't take too long! Kncny11 (shoot) 16:44, 6 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Infobox and lede

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  • airing back-to-back with the second episode "Flying"." → "back-to-back with the second episode, "Flying"."
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  • "She realizes that she was sent there by mistake and must" → "Eleanor, who was sent to The Good Place by mistake, must then"
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  • "critics, praising" → "critics, who praised"
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Plot

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  • Sits at 392 words without the parentheticals, good job!
  • ""The Good Place."" → ""The Good Place"." per WP:LQ
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  • Comma after "their total points are tallied"
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  • "Also" → "Additionally"
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  • "she's not" → "she is not"
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  • "she's ever done" → "she has ever done"
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  • "While on a party" → "while at a party"
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  • "whether to help Eleanor or not" → "whether or not to help Eleanor."
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  • Mention in the first sentence that Eleanor insults Tahani at the party so that it makes sense later when talking about the things wreaking havoc
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  • Inconsistent capitalization of the/The Good Place
  Fixed to "the Good Place" besides first mention.

Production

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Development

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  • "then untitled" → "then-untitled"
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  • Split the first sentence into two, i.e. "based purely on a pitch by Michael Schur. Schur told the network..."
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  • "In deciding to work with Schur, a person he was a fan of, Goddard said" → "Goddard, a fan of Schur's previous work, said..."
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  • "before finding out that Schur"
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  • "In finally reading the script," → "After finally reading the script,"
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  • comma after "that included all faiths"
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  • "who are part" → "who were part" (I mean, they are dead)
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  • "a favorite series of Schur's."
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Casting

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  • "it was announced" → "NBC announced"
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  • "the first synopsis of the show was also released" (eliminate repetition)
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  • comma after "own self-improvement course"
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  • put "Chris" in quotation marks
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  • I didn't read it as saying that Chris was renamed Chidi, but that Chris was an altogether fake character
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  • put "Tessa" in quotation marks as well
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Reception

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Viewers

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  • Rename this subhead "Ratings"
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  • "This means that 2.3 percent of all households with televisions watched the episode, while 8 percent of all households watching television at that time watched it." → "This means that it was seen by 2.3 percent of all households with television, and 8 percent of all households watching television at the time."
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  • "With these ratings, The Good Place"
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  • "second most watched" → "second most-watched"
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  • put "behind The Voice" in parentheses
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  • Mention (from the Deadline citation) that after DVR increases, The Good Place became the most-watched comedy series premiere of the season
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Reviews

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  • Rename this subhead "Critical reception"
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  • ""unique, fun TV."" → ""unique, fun TV"." per MOS:LQ
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  • ""ensemble needs work."" → ""ensemble needs work"." per MOS:LQ
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  • WL Vulture
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  • ""clever, funny, and pleasantly familiar."" → ""clever, funny, and pleasantly familiar"." per MOS:LQ
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References

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  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues on refs [7] (BuzzFeed) and [10] (The Futon Critic)
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General comments

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  • Article is stable
  • Images are good
  • Earwig score comes back very high at 79.8%. The plot summary is almost a word-for-word copy of the TVTropes recap page. Since TVTropes is another wiki, I won't fail the article for this, but revamping the plot summary to stray from that is probably a good move.
  Fixed Rewrote plot summary.
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