Talk:Exelon Pavilions/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Lpangelrob in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    "Beeby is also the designer of the Joan W. and Irving B. Harris Theater for Music and Dance." - parenthetical... remove as it doesn't have anything to do with the Exelon Pavilions.
    I revised the text to clarify the significance of the link.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 01:51, 9 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
    "The North Pavilions are the first Chicago buildings to use building integrated photovoltaic cells, i.e., a solar energy system incorporated into the building's construction materials." - why the i.e.? That clause seems to be a definition of the term.
    I reworded this.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:34, 9 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
    " the future expansion of the Art Institute of Chicago." - calling it the Modern Wing is probably OK; linking to it would be better. Spellcheck on "pavlions".
    There is no link for the Modern Wing that I know of.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    "The pavilions provide sufficient energy to power the equivalent of 14 star-rated energy-efficient houses in Chicago." - checked the source, and sure enough, that's what it says. star-rated should be linked... somewhere. Energy Star?
    Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 01:54, 9 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
    Need more details as to what that actually meant.
    At some point it should be noted that Exelon and ComEd are energy utilites/distributors (whichever is technically correct).
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    I tried to think of other major aspects of the pavilions, but couldn't really think of any. So it looks pretty good; just some minor issues. —Rob (talk) 22:09, 8 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

I addressed a couple of points, and now I think it meets the criteria. —Rob (talk) 13:00, 9 July 2008 (UTC)Reply