Talk:Exercise addiction/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 00:29, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

I will start this review by the weekend.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:29, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

• [unreliable medical source?] and [citation needed] tags need to be resolved.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:46, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
• Dab links checker to the right shows four issues.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:48, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

WP:LEAD

• Should start with a declarative/definitive statement that sets forth the subject for its opening sentence.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:54, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
  • In this case since the subject is a bit of a controversy, the LEAD should present a summary of the controversy surrounding the subject matter.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:58, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
• Based on the Table of Contents, I doube that the LEAD is adequately summarizing the remaining article as it should. Try to include a summary of each section in the LEAD.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:54, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Classification

• The term also->the term also--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:02, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
• no space between punctuation and reference.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:02, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
• Please explain which leading thinkers or schools of thought believe which definitions.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:02, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Signs and symptoms

• For which of the definitions are these the signs and symptoms.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:02, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

• This article needs to be reorganized. One-line and one-paragraph sections are not proper.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:05, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

I am quickfailing this one. It is not really close to being ready.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:06, 9 December 2011 (UTC)