Talk:Fader Bergström

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June 18, 2022	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

Latest comment: 2 years ago8 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:Fader Bergström/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:13, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )

3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this one today! --K. Peake 07:13, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thank you so much! Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
- Thanks.
Remove the best-known and best-loved songs part, as that is not sourced
- Done.
Add a sentence ending the lead about the reception/legacy of the composition
- Done.

Context

Good
- Thanks.

Song

Music and verse form

Add relevant text to the audio sample to justify usage
- Added.
Pipe 3/4 time to Triple metre
- Done.

Lyrics

Pipe Fredman to Jean Fredman
- Done.

Reception

Retitle to Reception and legacy
- Done.
"before the Chancellor of Justice. Fortunately" → "before the Chancellor of Justice and fortunately,"

^* Done.

Are you sure unbridled is an appropriate term here?
- Said 'unrestrained' instead. Means the same thing.
Pipe street-girls to Prostitution
- Done.
Add the release year of Glimmande nymf
- Added.
Imgs look good!!
- Thanks.

References

Copyvio score looks quite good at 31.5%!
- Noted.
Should ref 13 be cited in place of ref 8 since it includes p. 149?
- Merged refs.
Remove or replace ref 16 per WP:RSPYT
- Removed.

Sources

Wikilink as Albert Bonniers Förlag instead
- Done.

External links

Good
- Thanks.

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 07:36, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
- Done all those, thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:01, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Chiswick Chap Nice work on this, but you still need to fix the Chanceller prose in reception since those sentences are too short to be on their own. --K. Peake 20:47, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:17, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

✓ Pass now, thanks for fixing everything so quickly! --K. Peake 07:02, 18 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

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