Talk:Falkner Island Light/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Jamesx12345 (talk · contribs) 20:40, 20 July 2014 (UTC)Reply


I'll review this over the next few days. Jamesx12345 20:40, 20 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Just a few points. Jamesx12345 22:03, 24 July 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • Why is Andrew Leete mentioned here but not at Falkner Island? Just seems a bit odd.
  • It's not made immediately clear that the keeper's house and light are adjacent, and that the light was damaged as well during the fire.
  • The slightly abbreviated table isn't ideal - it would probably be best to remove the table from this article, and just have the complete list.
Fixed, I was concerned with the chronology for Leete on the main article, since it didn't wedge in appropriately. That has been addressed. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 19:15, 25 July 2014 (UTC)Reply
Since the issues are fixed, I'll step in and pass this. Wizardman 21:54, 11 August 2014 (UTC)Reply