Talk:Falko Bindrich/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Epicgenius^{(talk to me • see my contributions)} 20:40, 18 April 2013 (UTC)

• Minor grammar errors (like "...2009 and 2010 Chess Olympiads In 2012..." in Paragraph 2. There's no period, in this case.
  • done, thanks for catching that.

• This only shows Bindrich's career from 2003 to 2011. There's no history of his career after that. (Although, you can include "2012 Bundesliga cheating accusations" as a subsection of his career)
  • I'll try to add a few details from after 2011. Okay, he hasn't done too much since his cheating accusations, because I don't think any major events have accepted him into their tournaments, but the little he has done is now in the article, thanks for your suggestions. :) ChessFiends (talk)

• The bolded moves are hard to understand for people who don't understand algebraic notation. Could you add the algebraic notation template?
  • done

• 95% of the "early life" section is about his early chess career.
  • This I can't really change, biographies can only report what articles say about the person, and in this case the only notable things to be verified are about his chess career.

• Too few articles link here.
  • Added a link in the Zaven Andriasian article.

Overall, it's a well-organized article. I think it's ready to receive a GAN. Epicgenius^{(talk to me • see my contributions)} 20:40, 18 April 2013 (UTC)