Talk:Fantôme Brewery

Well written, but unencyclopedic

This article reads more like a (well written) beer label than an encyclopedia article, and needs to be edited for tone. While true, assertions relating to the popularity of this brewery need citations. - superβεεcat  18:08, 22 September 2009 (UTC)

Added some more citations based on the documentation available online - newspaper and magazine articles, etc. Removed the citations tag based on that. Included references stating the popularity of the brewery outside of Belgium per the request. If you have a more specific concern, vis-a-vis sources, please state it and let's try to address.Shorn again (talk) 23:26, 23 September 2009 (UTC)

I've just tagged this for tone - hadn't realised it had been previously tagged. Appreciate that there's been an attempt to clean up, but langauge is rather flowery - needs to be rather more neutral and sober so that a reader can trust what is being said. SilkTork *^YES! 00:24, 2 June 2010 (UTC)

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