Talk:Fermat's Last Tango/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:06, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:06, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
- The FUR for the CD cover has a couple of entries not filled in.
- Added.
- What makes curtainup.com a reliable source?
- Difficult to argue by Wikipedia's rules that it is. It seems to have been a notable review website in the late 1990s/early 2000s (and the many uses both at Wikipedia and in Gbooks hits seem to confirm this) but I have dropped it as a reference for facts. It is now only used as a source for its review, and I think this is defensible.
- 'criticised that Daniel Keane does not "become a real character"': "criticized" requires a direct object.
- Rewritten.
- 'audiences of screenings of the film version reacting "mildly amused to enthusiastic."' Needs rewriting; "reacting" can't take a direct object like this.
- Rewritten.
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:52, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing! I will get to this soon. —Kusma (talk) 23:19, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
- @Mike Christie, would you like to take another look? —Kusma (talk) 15:42, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- Pass. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:13, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- @Mike Christie, would you like to take another look? —Kusma (talk) 15:42, 23 August 2022 (UTC)