Talk:Fernando Cajías/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:36, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Not much to do. 7-day hold to Krisgabwoosh. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:51, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

Lead

• exercise minor public functions There has to be a more idiomatic way to say this.
  • Changed to continued to hold minor public posts. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:56, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Early life

• Shuffle punctuation a bit: Cajías was the eldest of ten siblings: six sisters (Dora, Beatriz, Lupe, Magdalena, Martha Teresa, and Isabel) and three brothers (Francisco, Huáscar, and Pedro), a substantial...
  •  Done, although used em dashes rather than parenthesis. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Academic work

• In his last public function Maybe "post" instead of "function"
  • Changed to In his final public post Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Personal life

• Cajías' was Stray possessive should be removed.
  •  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 04:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

Sourcing and spot checks

Earwig mostly catches work titles from the official biography.

• 2: Mentions Fernando as Huáscar's eldest son; also has brief bios of his siblings. Y
• 9: Pulls from a list of titles held on his official site (ABOUTSELF). Y
• 11: AGF on these register-to-access sources. Y
• 19: Loss in his 2004 vice rectoral campaign. Y
• 23: Biographical information on Naya Ponce, paired with #10 for marriage. Y
  • I had an additional question regarding sources. As it wasn't a super notable event, I couldn't find any online news sources reporting on Cajías's withdrawal as a candidate for rector. I ended up using this post from the Facebook account of the front that was sponsoring his candidacy. Is that valid as a source? I understand that Twitter posts are occasionally acceptable; is it the same for Facebook? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:46, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

@Krisgabwoosh The relevant policy is WP:ABOUTSELF, and I would accept that. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:55, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

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