Talk:Fieldin Culbreth

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Go Phightins! in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Go Phightins! (talk · contribs) 21:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

I have made a handful of edits to this page, so barring any objection, I will review it anyway. I will review and then ask for a second opinion to ensure neutrality. Go Phightins! 21:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

A few miscellaneous notes:

  • In the umpiring career section, give something quantitative about "did not take long" to get to the big leagues...one month or one year, or one decade?   Done
  • How is the Mariners game score relevant?   Done I removed it.
  • Cite his 2013 crew.   Done
  • Isn't "umpired" usually the verb we associate with umps rather than "officiated"? Perhaps, but using "umpired" over and over again might be a little redundant. I think "officiated" is fine.
  • There's a problem with the balance in this article. Most of the "notable games" and "incidents" are from the last five or six years, and hardly any are from pre-2005, yet he has been an umpire since 1993. We need some due weight to each part of his career.   Done, maybe. Take a look and see what you think.
  • References look generally OK. I will spot check when all other issues are addressed. Thanks. Go Phightins! 01:12, 24 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
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