Talk:Filipino community in Toronto
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editExcellent draft, Kate! Naomi TBB199 (talk) 13:52, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
No changes - just feedback on draft.
editI like how you've organized your article.
You give A LOT of statistics in your Status section. Think about which most contribute to status, and explain how.
It looks like you've got the right ideas about providing inline citations and then full references at the end, but there were some errors in formatting the citations. Let me know if you need help fixing them. Citations 1-7 look good except that #4 is incomplete. Also, make things like "(Insidetoronto.com, 2016)" live links.
It will be helpful to provide links to the various institutional supports directly in the text. Interested readers can then easily find out more about them.
Check your caption for the photo. They don't seem to match! Naomi TBB199 (talk) 22:20, 11 February 2016 (UTC)