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Several problems with this part of the article: lack of sources, sub-standard English (although I already fixed most of that) and a contradiction of sorts: how can many surfers have attempted to ride the wave if it only occurs randomly every two years? Also, I don't know if the reference to the novel by Horowitz is worth a mention (although it is where I learned about the wave). Vadigor12:25, 25 August 2007 (UTC)Reply
Yes, I think the tone isn't quite appropriate in this section:
It's not clear what "Many surfers have attempted to ride the wave" means
"Just look up the coast..." feels a bit too emotive for an encyclopaedia article
The comment about the mass media ("At least three times per year, the mass media spreads half-truths, inconsistencies and plain rubbish about the cribbar.") doesn't seem to be neutral point of view.
I have re-written the article (hopefully in an encyclopedic tone) and removed the 'Tone' tag. I've also removed the "surf report" links as they fail WP:ELNO. The article still needs additional inline citations so the 'Refimprove' tag should remain for now. Andy F (talk) 07:47, 28 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
