Talk:Fjäriln vingad syns på Haga/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

You seem to have a lot of nominees up for review... --K. Peake 07:24, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Very few now, January was crazy. Thanks as always for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:07, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
  • Thanks!

• The most popular part should be after the lyrical description part
  • Moved.

• Merge both paras since they are too short to standalone
  • Done.

• Wikilink Gustav III to itself
  • Done.

• "know Fjäril'n vingad by heart; it has been recorded many times" → "know the composition by heart; it has been recorded numerous times"
  • Rearranged.

Context

• Good

Song

Music and verse form

• Add relevant text to the audio sample
  • Added.

• Pipe rhythming pattern to Rhyme scheme
  • Done.

Lyrics

• Add a comma after Adolf Ulrik Kirstein
  • Done.
• "describes it as a" → "describes the composition as a
  • Done.
• Where are the writing years sourced by [11]?
  • Used Massengale instead, as Bellman.net usually does.
• Merge the last para with the above one per overly short size
  • Done.
• Wikilink Gustav III to itself, doing the same on img text
  • Done.

Reception

• Video looks good!
  • Noted.

• Retitle to Reception and legacy
  • Done.

• Pipe Solna to Solna Municipality
  • Done.

• "in 2005 it was" → "in 2005, the composition was"
  • Done.

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 25.4%!!!
  • Noted.
• Make sure all date formatting is consistent
  • Checked.
• Ref 7 should lead to the Hassler and Dahl source like ref 13 does
  • Fixed.
• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 9 and remove Riksarkive from the title, citing as publisher and piping to National Archives of Sweden
  • Replaced ref.
• Cite Populär Historia instead for ref 13 and as work/website with the wikilink
  • Done.
• Add the language parameter to ref 18
  • Added.
• Cite Svensk mediedatabas as publisher on ref 21 with the wikilink, also add the proper title instead
  • Done.
• Add the language parameter to ref 23 and wikilink Zecchino d'Oro
  • Done.
• Wikilink Sveriges Radio on ref 27
  • Done.
• Wikilink Nimbus Records on ref 29
  • Done.

Sources

• Pipe G. Schirmer to G. Schirmer, Inc.
  • Done.
• Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster
  • Done.

External links

• Remove the Anders Stävarby link per WP:RSPYT
  • Gone.

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 09:00, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Many thanks, that seems to be everything. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:15, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

• Chiswick Chap ✓ Pass time, very satisfied with your speed once again and I briefly copyedited the lead! --K. Peake 21:40, 9 February 2022 (UTC)