Talk:Flawless Shade/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 19:39, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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There are not many changes to do. I do wonder if the article is comprehensive enough, but I do understand if their career has really only lasted the last seven or so years (I'd like to hear the nominator's thoughts). 7-day hold to Another Believer. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 20:23, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

The article is definitely comprehensive, as I searched the internet until the leads came to an end. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:30, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• Flawless Shade hosted drag shows at CC Slaughters, karaoke at Capitol Bar, and trivia at Victoria Bar, as of 2019 The last comma is not needed.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:30, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
• She is one of six young queer influencers who featured in Adidas's 2019 gay pride advertising campaign, and was named Miss Gay Oregon 2020, one of few Black winners of that pageant title to date. The first comma is not needed. See User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:30, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
• "Washington, D.C." needs a comma after, much like a city and state need MOS:GEOCOMMA.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:30, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
• Flawless Shade hosted and performed at Botanist House's drag show, as of 2021 See above.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:30, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

Other items

• Images are freely licensed. They need alt text.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:32, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
• Earwig turns up no issues.
• References are archived.

@Sammi Brie: Thanks for the review! Please let me know if anything else is needed here. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 20:55, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.