Talk:Forbin-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:13, 29 July 2020 (UTC)

I will review, comments to follow in a few days. Zawed (talk) 09:13, 29 July 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Something seems off here: a fleet program that according with the theories of the Jeune École, which proposed a fleet based on cruisers and torpedo boats to defend France. I think it should be read something like "a fleet program that, in accordance with the theories of the Jeune École, proposed a fleet based on cruisers and torpedo boats to defend France."
  • Must've been distracted when I wrote that - I like your solution

Design

• particularly a result I think you mean "particularly as a result"
  • Good catch

Other stuff

• Image tags looks OK
• No dupe links
• Earwig tool doesn't pick up obvious copyvios

Only a couple of minor issues, otherwise looks good for GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:07, 9 August 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Zawed. Parsecboy (talk) 19:47, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

Your changes look satisfactory. I consider that this article meets the GA criteria - well written, illustrated with appropriately tagged images, reasonable in coverage and cited to reliable sources. Passing as GA now. Zawed (talk) 08:32, 13 August 2020 (UTC)