Talk:Force Majeure (Millennium)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:46, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • Plot: "…and takes the girls…" -> "…and they take the girls…"
  • Plot: "Black does not know where the cult have escaped to" -> "Black does not know where the cult has escaped to"
  • Reception: "…borrowed from The X-Files…" The X-Files should be italicized

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:45, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for reviewing this one. I've made the changes you've suggested. By the way, this is definitely an episode you should check out, especially if you enjoyed TXF's "Beyond the Sea". Plus, Johannessen's always good for an interesting script. GRAPPLE X 20:05, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
I'll have to look into it. I think I'm the only X-Phile who actually liked "Orison". As for this, passing. Good work.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:23, 29 May 2012 (UTC)Reply