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editBold text Haldeman butchered the ending. silsor 21:20, 8 October 2005 (UTC)
- Quite. —Cryptic (talk) 09:23, 9 October 2005 (UTC)
- This book is proof that any science fiction novel with God as a character sucks. -- llywrch (talk) 00:46, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
I can't believe he actually put a Westworld reference in. One worthy of noting in the synopsis, even. Jesus. Bieeanda (talk) 02:36, 7 June 2010 (UTC)
sentence needs reworked
edit"Forever Free is much shorter than the preceding book and its ending involves an archtypical Deus Ex Machina." Reads a bit too much like a sentence found in a book review. Drop the size of book comparison and instead just stating "archtypical Deus Ex Machina", describe the circumstances, this is in the spoils section. Jon 16:39, 20 June 2006 (UTC)
- There's not much more to say about it, it really is that bad. After a series of increasingly bizarre events, God Himself jumps out of the pantry and says "LOL, I DID IT!" The End. Now aren't you glad you didn't buy the book? silsor 22:27, 20 June 2006 (UTC)
- When I read it, back in the day - I remember it was a great mystery to see what was causing all these things. I remember thinking the whole 'God did it' explination was the BIGGEST cop-out I had ever seen. I'm still pissed about it. Raul654 05:17, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
Disimbaguation needed?
editShould there be a Disimbaguation for this title? There is another book called Forever Free by Joy Adamson and is the third book in the Born Free series. Lighthope 05:43, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
there are somthings wrong with the synopsis. some of it is assumptions, if you look at the last few chapters of the book. for example the namless never states if there are more than one. yet the synpsis says gods —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.136.106.153 (talk) 16:04, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
This Art Is A Mess
editbadly written, poor grammar, run-on sentences, etc.. ive started to try to clean it up, but without complete paragraph restructuring its a Badly Written Article.Moss Ryder (talk) (bad punctuation and sp in my post, but i double and treble check it for articles.