Talk:Four Seasons Restaurant/GA1

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 18:37, 18 September 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Prose

Lede

• Plantings is a weird word here. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:59, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
  • I have replaced this with "vegetation". Epicgenius (talk) 16:31, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• L. Garth Huxtable and Ada Louise Huxtable - probably don't need to repeat the last name. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:59, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed. Epicgenius (talk) 16:31, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• Unless I missed it, the lede doesn't seem to mention clientele. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:59, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
  • I've added a brief mention of clientele. Thanks for taking up this review Lee Vilenski. Epicgenius (talk) 16:31, 20 September 2022 (UTC)

General

• wines and cocktails - could probably just say "alcahol". Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
• Aside - I was really hoping the "Pool Room" was a Billiard hall. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
• Is the Fasano Group notable per WP:REDLINK? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
• Image caption has "pool room" without capitals. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
• Can we link swimming pool?
• On a couple occasions, such as "The stature of the restaurant was such that, according to New York magazine, Stockli "could barely be bothered to greet"", we comment on New York magazine, but we have an author. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:37, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
  • I've spent waaay too long reading through this one, and can't find all that much to critique. I'm going to go ahead and pass. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:02, 23 September 2022 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.