Talk:François-Joseph-Victor Broussais
 | François-Joseph-Victor Broussais was nominated as a Natural sciences good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (May 25, 2017). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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editThis article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot 14:25, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
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editHi, I'm from 140.106. First off, I wanted to say good job on expanding an article that was basically a stub before. I think this could be improved further though. Possibly split up the Life section into Early Life/Education and Later Career? I also think the Works section could be more detailed as to what specifically Broussais did in those studies. Lastly, the sentence structure could be more varied. Again, good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dsun15 (talk • contribs) 04:18, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
Good job on the article! I agree that the life section could be improved especially by changing the heading from Life to let's say, Medical Training/Background. I would also say for that section to remember to not just refer to him as he in every sentence; adding his last name keeps people's attention and makes it easier to follow. Zerimare10 (talk) 13:23, 17 March 2017 (UTC) Zerimare10
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 10:11, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
This article is not very comprehensive and has many paragraphs without citations, so I will have to quickfail it. --FunkMonk (talk) 10:11, 25 May 2017 (UTC)