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Promotionalism
editI have revised the article to reduce the extent of promotionalism. Even for the best of products, even reliably sourced promotionalism is promotionalism , and WP does not do that. Encyclopedic writing avoids adjectives, and avoids evaluative summary. (In revising this article I used & repeated the first name , which is unusual, because it was necessary for clarity among the three generations mentioned). Please do not restore the over-flowery writing. The fame of the wine is even clearer without it. DGG ( talk ) 05:28, 3 March 2014 (UTC)