Talk:Frank Padavan

Brochure-like

This article reads as though it were adapted from a campaign brochure. The section headings say it all: "Keeping New Yorkers Safe", "A Champion For New York Children", etc. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.215.181.87 (talk) 21:31, February 9, 2007 (UTC)

This article is nothing more than a promotional puff piece written by Padavan's office. This needs a total re-write to conform to biography standards.

On 1/3/09, I attempted to make this page a factual bio, rather than a campaign promotional piece. I welcome edits, comments, and additional info, but I hope this is at least a reasonable starting point for an actual biography. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.179.74.120 (talk) 15:49, January 3, 2009 (UTC)

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