Talk:Freedom of Worship (painting)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 13:27, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: TonyTheTiger(T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD)

Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 13:27, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   Pass

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   See below for issues with lead & layout.  Done

1. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   Pass

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   Pass

   C. No original research:

   Pass

2. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   Pass

   B. Focused:

   Pass

3. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   Pass

4. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   Pass

5. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   Pass

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

   Pass

6. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   On hold for the 1b issues.  Done Pass.

WP:LEAD:  Done

• Fix Lead (WP:BETTER).
  • The opening paragraph should clearly explain the subject so that the reader is prepared for the greater level of detail that follows. I recommend the following revision:
  • Freedom to Worship or Freedom of Worship is the second of the four most well-known oil paintings produced by the American artist Norman Rockwell that were based on the four goals called the Four Freedoms enunciated by the President of the United States Franklin D. Roosevelt in his State of the Union Address delivered on January 6, 1941.[1]. This painting was considered as the most successful of the series by Rockwell along with Freedom of Speech. The series also called the Four Freedoms was published in the February 27, 1943 Issue of The Saturday Evening Post alongside an essay by a prominent thinker of the day Will Durant.[2]
    • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:16, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

WP:LAYOUT:  Done

• Fix short paragraphs (MOS:PARAGRAPHS). Paragraphs should be short enough to be readable, but long enough to develop an idea.
  • Fix short paragraphs in Description section.
    • Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:47, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Fix short paragraphs in Production section.
    • Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:28, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Fix short paragraphs in Critical review section.
    • Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:43, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:51, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 03:52, 6 January 2014 (UTC)