Talk:French battleship Démocratie/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 15:56, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

• Hi, I'll review this shortly. MathewTownsend (talk) 15:56, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

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A very nice article. I made a few minor edits which you're free to revert.[1]

I've only a few comments:

• "She displaced up to 14,489 metric tons (14,260 long tons; 15,971 short tons) at full load. She had a crew of between 739 and 769 officers and enlisted men. She was powered by three vertical triple expansion engines with twenty-two Belleville boilers. " three sentences in a row start with "She".

• "Démocratie 22.7 percent hits," - is there a word left out here?

Otherwise all is fine. will put on hold while you look over my comments.

Best wishes, MathewTownsend (talk) 16:45, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Both should be fixed now, thanks for reviewing the article! Parsecboy (talk) 17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   a. prose: clear and concise, respects copyright laws, correct spelling and grammar:

   b. complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, summary style and list incorporation:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   a. provides references to all sources in the section(s) dedicated to footnotes/citations according to the guide to layout:

   b. provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:

   c. no original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   b. it remains focused and does not go into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.

   fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   no edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   a. images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   b. images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   pass!

Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 19:30, 15 September 2012 (UTC)