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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:49, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
Criteria
edit1. Prose ✓ Pass
2. Verifiability ✓ Pass
3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass
4. Neutral ✓ Pass
5. Stable ✓ Pass
6. Illustrations ✓ Pass
7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass
Comments
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- "Four of the guns were mounted in sponsoned on the upper deck," - Maybe it's a technical term I'm not aware of, but sponsoned is a very odd word form. Is this a typo?
- Good catch - that started out along the lines of "four of the guns were sponsoned on the upper deck" and then got rewritten but not entirely, apparently!
- "but these were delayed after problems her propulsion system" - Should this be "after problems with her propulstion system"
- Hmm - I had two spaces between "problems" and "her" - must have thought I typed a word when I hadn't - I must be losing my mind
- Link torpedo boats
- It's linked on first use in the first para of the body
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- AGF on book sourcing
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- Do any of the sources indicate the ship's namesake?
- Nothing I've seen, unfortunately; obviously, it's Davout, but I haven't seen anything explicitly state as much
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- Images are all public domain, and the tagging seems to be accurate.
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That's it. Very good work. Placing on hold, should be a very quick fix. Hog Farm (talk) 18:15, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks very much! Parsecboy (talk) 20:21, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
- Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 21:16, 11 May 2020 (UTC)