Talk:French cruiser Desaix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 02:22, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

This article is in fine shape, as expected. A few comments:

• suggest "from 1909–1914."→"from 1909 to 1914."
• As tensions rolse
• draft (ship) needs piping
• the displacement conversion isn't rounded the same in the body and infobox
• power is PS in the body and ihp in the infobox, and the conversions don't match for that reason I expect
• perhaps specify in the body that the secondary guns were single mounts, samer for the anti-TB guns?
• you could move the info about the unprotected embrasures to where you introduce the secondary guns
• the conning tower bottom range doesn't match between the body and infobox
• French cruiser Dupleix (1900) needs to be templated
• was the 3rd Squadron a Light one too?
  • No, the hierarchy went from squadron, to squadron of XXX type to division
• is 1st Naval Army notable?
  • Yes, though I'm undecided whether to use its French or English name for the article title.
• suggest "The successes of German merchant raiders"
• no useable pics?

That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:39, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

G'day Sturm just a reminder this is here. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:18, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for your very thorough and helpful review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:23, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:00, 17 May 2020 (UTC)