Talk:French cruiser Jeanne d'Arc (1899)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:54, 29 May 2018 (UTC)

• I can do this one today. Courcelles (talk) 16:54, 29 May 2018 (UTC)

• "although she was reduced to reserve before the end of the year. " Could use one more word here to explain what that means. "reserve fleet"?
• "the conning tower was 138-millimetre thick." The only one not converted to incches, and should be millimeters, anyhow.
  • That was the caliber of the secondary armament. But you're right about the bad grammar.
• "and the sponsons" I do not know this word... wikilink or anything available?
  • Linked.
• "The ship began a lengthy cruise of the Atlantic, Mediterranean and Baltic Seas that lasted from 10 October to 29 July 1913. She visited the Indian Ocean via the Suez Canal on her next cruise from 10 October to 27 July 1914." should likely specify which years the 10 Octobers were.
  • Good idea.
• "Turkish-owned Levantine" Turkish or Ottoman? I'm just asking for myself, primarily.
  • Really either or. Source use them pretty much interchangeably.
• Thanks for the quick review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:52, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

• Not a lot wrong here, great work, as usual from you. Courcelles (talk) 18:41, 29 May 2018 (UTC)

• Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 12:43, 31 May 2018 (UTC)