Talk:French cruiser Kléber

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

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• "and had a maximum draft (ship) of 7.46 meters" - I think a piped link will be better here, the (ship) qualifier doesn't need to appear in the text
• "The nickel steel waterline armor belt" - MOS:SEAOFBLUE, three links in a row
• "The sides of the elliptical conning tower were 100 to 120 millimeters thick." - Infobox gives 110 to 120, is there a reason why the ranges are different?
• "During a visit to the United States, The ship" - lowercase for The.
• "During a visit to the United States, The ship" - See MOS:OVERLINK, I don't think the United States needs linked here.
• "After the Kingdom of Bulgaria joined the Central Powers " - Link Central Powers

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• "Kléber had three-cylinder engines that used 20 Niclausse boilers at a working pressure 18 kg/cm2 (1,765 kPa; 256 psi)." - The infobox states "24 Belleville boilers"
• "Kléber collided with the Royal Australian Navy troopship HMT Boorara in the Aegean Sea on 17 July 1915, forcing Boorara to beach herself on Mudros and damaging the cruiser's bow" - Source just says July 1915, unless I missed where the 27 is given.

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Just a little tightening up necessary. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 18:36, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: - Courtesy ping to nominator. Hog Farm (talk) 22:40, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:05, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Good work. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 21:44, 16 May 2020 (UTC)