Talk:French cruiser Lavoisier/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 20:42, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

As expected, this article is in fine shape. I have a few comments:

• Beginning iIn 1903, she began
  • Fixed
• suggest "a decade of service onwith the Newfoundland"
  • Done - must have been thinking "station" when I started writing the sentence
• The Linois class were ordered to as part
  • Fixed
• the length and beam measurements don't match between the body and infobox
  • Fixed
• engines and range not in the infobox?
  • Added
• the TT conversion isn't rounded the same in the body and infobox
  • Fixed
• you could link armored cruiser
  • Done
• she alternated between patrolling the fisheries withand making calls in ports
  • Done
• carrying a doctor for the French settlements on the islands? What islands?
  • Clarified
• suggest "Horta, Azores, Portugal"→"Horta in the Portuguese Azores"
  • Works for me
• move link to Dublin to first mention
  • Done
• suggest "Port Said, Egypt, on the 30th"
  • Done
• suggest "at Corfu in the Ionian Sea"
  • Good idea
• the link to U-28 is to the dab page, was this the German or A-H one?
  • Good catch

That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:25, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks PM - some of these applied to the other ships as well, so hopefully that'll make those reviews easier when the time comes. Parsecboy (talk) 13:06, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:57, 8 May 2020 (UTC)