Talk:French cruiser Troude/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:45, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
Pretty minor tweaks needed here:
- suggest lk-on for "2,000 long tons (2,032 t)" to link t
- Fixed
- "into the Forbin-
typeclass"- Good catch
- a sentence fragment about the Jeune École doctrine would be good
- Good idea
- suggest "four other protected cruisers, Amiral Cécille, Jean Bart, and her sister ships Cosmao and Lalande."
- Done
- "
her sister shipsLalande and Cosmao, and the protected cruisers Tage and Suchet."- Done
- link Screening (tactical) for screen
- Done
- "the protected cruiser D'Estrées"
- Done
- "the protected cruiser Lavoisier"
- Done
- link naval register
- Done
That's all I could find, nice job. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:36, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks! Parsecboy (talk) 10:19, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 22:36, 13 June 2020 (UTC)