Talk:French destroyer L'Indomptable/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:21, 16 September 2019 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

• the Germans did actually occupy Vichy France, so perhaps "when the Germans tried to occupyoccupied Vichy France in November 1942"
• suggest lk=on for the first displacement figure, same for the infobox
• the lower range of the range in the infobox isn't supported in the body

  You still need the range of the range (ie 2,700–2,900 nmi) in the body. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:13, 17 September 2019 (UTC)

  Fixed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:31, 17 September 2019 (UTC)

• were the main guns protected by gunshields?
• "to accommodate the Hotchkiss machine guns"" What Hotchkiss machine guns?
• "L'Indomptable In 1941–1942"?
• comma after "in cases"
• is there a common translation for Force de Raid?
• "to French North Africa., and escorted"?
• link attack on Mers-el-Kébir

Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:38, 16 September 2019 (UTC)

All done. See if my changes are suitable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:40, 17 September 2019 (UTC)

All good, I tweaked a typo. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:41, 17 September 2019 (UTC)