Talk:French destroyer Siroco (1939)/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:43, 26 September 2019 (UTC)Reply


A few minor comments:

  • In the lead, say whether she entered active service with the Italians or Germans
    • Incorporated some text from her sister Lanesquenet
  • the body says one twin 37 mm mount, but the infobox says 2 single mounts?
  • the laid down dates don't match

That is all I have. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:05, 26 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Really appreciate all the reviews--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:10, 26 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
No worries, have been putting in a big effort for the drive... This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:16, 27 September 2019 (UTC)Reply