Talk:French ironclad Duguesclin/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:45, 28 March 2020 (UTC)Reply


Nice little article. I have a few comments:

  • in the lead, "which were smaller versions of the first-rate vessels built for the main fleet"
    • Done
  • in the lead, "on the nautical"? centerline?
    • I have no idea why, but my fingers kept wanting to type nautical every time I linked that - apparently I missed fixing one
  • link t in the body
    • Done
  • link knots in the body and kn in the infobox
    • Done
  • suggest "two forward placed abreast, and two aft, both of the latter on the centerline."
    • Works for me
  • link Hotchkiss gun#Hotchkiss revolving cannon
    • Done
  • "the two Vauban-class ironclads"
    • Fixed

That's all I've got. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:23, 28 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks Peacemaker. Parsecboy (talk) 11:41, 29 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:16, 29 March 2020 (UTC)Reply