Talk:French ironclad Reine Blanche/GA1

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Reviewer: JonCatalán^(Talk) 06:15, 11 October 2010 (UTC)

• "...and was rammed by one of her sisters in 1877." → I added the word "accidentally".
• "The Alma-class ironclads[Note 1] were designed as improved versions of the armored corvette Belliqueuse suitable for foreign deployments." → I'm not sure what your intentions were with this sentence, but I hope this makes it clearer, "The Alma-class ironclads[Note 1] were designed as improved versions of the armored corvette Belliqueuse, suited for foreign deployments."
• Related to the above, I added to the lead that the ship was meant as an improvement over the Belliqueuse.
• I did the usual light copyediting, apart from the specific edits I mention here.
• Maybe the note deserves referencing, as well.
• I edited the lead image's caption a bit.

JonCatalán^(Talk) 06:25, 11 October 2010 (UTC)