Talk:Freret Street

Latest comment: 8 months ago by 68.11.56.72 in topic Needs Updating re: Bill Long

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This is really coming along nicely. The structure you have established is doing a nice job for this article while also giving you plenty of opportunities to expand the article. In terms of expansion, you can also just consider extending some of the details you include here. For example, you mention the street car line, but offer no details about it. Likewise, each of the paragraphs in the Entertainment section could be expanded a bit more and given their own subheadings.

Nice work, so far!

jtodd1973 21:35, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Needs Updating re: Bill Long

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Bill Long was recently exonerated and released from Angola State Penitentiary. https://www.nola.com/news/courts/after-38-years-man-convicted-in-killing-of-freret-street-bakery-owner-returns-home/article_67be9326-b4b2-11ee-9a59-b7aad1814688.html 68.11.56.72 (talk) 14:40, 15 February 2024 (UTC)Reply