Talk:Fresno Yosemite International Airport

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Good articleFresno Yosemite International Airport has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Fresno Yosemite International Airport has a replica of a sequoia forest inside the terminal, reflecting the airport's role as a gateway to three national parks?

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There are a couple people who have been removing the Seasonal service to Honolulu, Morelia, and Denver without knowing these routes have always been, and always will be, SEASONAL. These people are removing these destinations instead of leaving them as Seasonal. This is blatantly false. Service to Honolulu is only for the summer tourist season. Service to Morelia is only for a few weeks around Christmas. Service to Denver is only for about eight months out of the year, excluding January through April-May. These routes ALWAYS return year after year. I will continue to monitor this page and will continue to undo the false information these people insist on doing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fredin323 (talkcontribs) 17:36, 2 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: 1.02 editor (talk · contribs) 03:58, 13 March 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll be taking this review expect comments soon 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 03:58, 13 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

A big cause of concern about this article is the large amount of unsourced text. I have added cn and cn span tags around the article for easier identification, and I ask you to help me spot texts that I've missed out while referencing. Thanks. 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 11:57, 13 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

I have added the requested references and rewrote sections where citations could not be easily found. There is one citation request I'll push back on...

At the turn of the 21st century, the city began an ambitious series of projects that would expand and completely remodel the airport.

I do not believe a citation is not necessary for that. It's just a summary sentance and the next four paragraphs are spent expanding on that thought. Those paragraphs have citations.
Ok, could you paraphrase the sentence instead as it may be controversial/promotional. 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 02:29, 14 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for taking up this GA review and I look forward to any more suggestions you may have. --RickyCourtney (talk) 20:13, 13 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

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  • 'Fresno is the largest... not served by southwest' -the sentence sound like a trivia and is discouraged from articles
  • im not that experienced in aviation articles but con the airlines and destinations section be merged with statistics?
  • Annual passenger traffic -> can it be arranged in chronological order?
  • also, the highway section of transportation sounds like a guide. Could you remove excess details?

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  • Ok, could you paraphrase the sentence instead as it may be controversial/promotional.
    • Done.
  • 'Fresno is the largest... not served by southwest' -the sentence sound like a trivia and is discouraged from articles
    • Agreed. Although the fact that the airport is not served by Southwest is a sore point among locals... it does venture heavily into trivia territory.
  • im not that experienced in aviation articles but con the airlines and destinations section be merged with statistics?
  • Annual passenger traffic -> can it be arranged in chronological order?
    • That whole section is poorly sourced and unlike other airports, Fresno does not make annual passenger traffic information easily available. I'm going to go ahead and eliminate that section until I can find more complete data.

--RickyCourtney (talk) 20:10, 14 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • also, the highway section of transportation sounds like a guide. Could you remove excess details?
    • I removed the part that mentions which freeway you take to reach which National Park. Hopefully that's what you meant.

--RickyCourtney (talk) 08:00, 16 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Overall

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Article looks good, all raised issues have been dealt with. Passing. 1.02 editor (C651 set 217/218) 08:46, 16 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

GA concerns

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I am concerned that this article no longer meets the good article criteria. Some of my concerns are outlined below:

  • There is uncited prose in the article, including several paragraphs in "Airline service"
  • The "Infrastructure" and "Ground transportation and access" sections suffer from MOS:OVERSECTION and should be reformatted.
  • The lead does not summarise all major aspects of the article. I recommend that the lead be expanded to include more information.

Is anyone interested in working on this article, or should this be sent to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 01:07, 27 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

I will review your concerns. RickyCourtney (talk) 21:33, 27 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Z1720 Could you be more specific about what aspects of the article that you feel the lead does not adequately summarize? That would greatly help me. Thank you. -- RickyCourtney (talk) 22:21, 30 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@RickyCourtney: My general rule of thumb for leads is that every level 2 heading should have some information in the lead. Right now, I can't find any information about future expansion, ground transportation and access, or accidents at the airport. Z1720 (talk) 17:02, 31 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
@RickyCourtney: Are you still interested in working on this article? Z1720 (talk) 15:26, 16 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
My apologies for the delay. I think I’ve addressed your concerns now. RickyCourtney (talk) 16:15, 18 November 2024 (UTC)Reply