Talk:Friedrich Freiherr von Hotze
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Auntieruth55 in topic First sentence
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First sentence
editThe first sentence should immediately establish notability, but it doesn't. How about mentioning that he was a Swiss military man upfront? Hekerui (talk) 16:19, 15 December 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks. Fixed. Auntieruth55 (talk) 18:18, 15 December 2009 (UTC)