Talk:Frontier Natural Products Co-op

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Zingster9 in topic Talkback

Reliable sources needed

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Currently in-process on seeking more reliable secondary sources - anyone is welcome to add them. (Zingster9 (talk) 13:32, 6 May 2009 (UTC))Reply

Spammy

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This article is beginning to read like an advert or corporate press release. Needs some careful pruning to bring it back into line. – ukexpat (talk) 15:00, 13 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Some examples:
  1. Fair Trade is the internationally recognized standard for social responsibility
  2. Frontier has been a leader in the promotion and support of organically grown products for over two decades.
  3. Available in conventional and natural food stores, the line now includes organic dried herbs, spices, seasoning blends, baking ingredients and mixes, dressings, sauces and gravy mixes.
The above are in my opinion close to, or just over, the promotional line. Also the article needs additional references from press, journals ect to support the subject's notability. Hope this helps. – ukexpat (talk) 15:35, 13 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Talkback

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Thanks for your help Ukexpat. I do appreciate it. I'm on it.--Zingster9 (talk) 16:28, 13 May 2009 (UTC)Reply