Talk:Fuck: Word Taboo and Protecting Our First Amendment Liberties/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Cirt in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Diannaa (talk · contribs) 16:08, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:
- I hope you don't mind I did some copy edits to simplify the language in a couple of spots.
- B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- The lead is a bit short compared to the size of the article and does not cover all the main points. Material could be drawn from the content summary and the impact section
- A. Provides references to all sources:
- Material is sourced, citations are uniformly formatted using citation templates. No technical errors were found. Checklinks and Reflinks found no problems
- B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:
- Cited sources are high quality news sources and journal articles. Spot checks revealed no copyright violations or too-close paraphrasing
- C. No original research:
- All opinions expressed are those of the cited sources; no OR found
- A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Main aspects are addressed:
- All main points for books are covered (author, summary of contents, style/genre [covered by the reviews], impact, pub. history, reception)
- B. Remains focused:
- A. Main aspects are addressed:
- Does it follow the neutral point of view policy?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
I have placed the article on hold for a week to address the one issue: the lead needs to be beefed up a bit as it does not presently cover all the main points addressed in the article. Very nice job Cirt, an interesting and informative article. -- Diannaa (talk) 17:10, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks very much Diannaa for doing the review, I will respond to this soon and note it back here. — Cirt (talk) 19:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Okay Diannaa I've expanded the lede/intro sect per your recommendation, above, perhaps you could have another look? — Cirt (talk) 22:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- It's great. Thanks for responding so quickly. The article has now passed to GA class. Good job -- Diannaa (talk) 22:25, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks very much! — Cirt (talk) 22:32, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- It's great. Thanks for responding so quickly. The article has now passed to GA class. Good job -- Diannaa (talk) 22:25, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Okay Diannaa I've expanded the lede/intro sect per your recommendation, above, perhaps you could have another look? — Cirt (talk) 22:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)