Talk:Fuck: Word Taboo and Protecting Our First Amendment Liberties/GA1

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Reviewer: Diannaa (talk · contribs) 16:08, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar: 
    I hope you don't mind I did some copy edits to simplify the language in a couple of spots.
    B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
    The lead is a bit short compared to the size of the article and does not cover all the main points. Material could be drawn from the content summary and the impact section  Y
    A. Provides references to all sources:  
    Material is sourced, citations are uniformly formatted using citation templates. No technical errors were found. Checklinks and Reflinks found no problems
    B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:  
    Cited sources are high quality news sources and journal articles. Spot checks revealed no copyright violations or too-close paraphrasing
    C. No original research:  
    All opinions expressed are those of the cited sources; no OR found
  2. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Main aspects are addressed:  
    All main points for books are covered (author, summary of contents, style/genre [covered by the reviews], impact, pub. history, reception)
    B. Remains focused:  
  3. Does it follow the neutral point of view policy?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  4. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  5. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  6. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

I have placed the article on hold for a week to address the one issue: the lead needs to be beefed up a bit as it does not presently cover all the main points addressed in the article. Very nice job Cirt, an interesting and informative article. -- Diannaa (talk) 17:10, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks very much Diannaa for doing the review, I will respond to this soon and note it back here. — Cirt (talk) 19:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Okay Diannaa I've expanded the lede/intro sect per your recommendation, above, perhaps you could have another look? — Cirt (talk) 22:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
It's great. Thanks for responding so quickly. The article has now passed to GA class. Good job -- Diannaa (talk) 22:25, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Thanks very much! — Cirt (talk) 22:32, 23 June 2013 (UTC)Reply