Talk:Fuuto PI/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 21:17, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Boneless Pizza! (talk · contribs) 00:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Placeholder 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 00:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

• allowing Sanjo greater creative freedom thanks to its mature readership - Odd choice of word, can you please reword it?
• Stage of Play section seems to be irrelevant information about Fuuto PI, can you perhaps remove it entirely?
• "The series ranked 15th on Kono Manga ga Sugoi! 2019 ranking of Top 20 manga for male readers.[35] It ranked eighth on Honya Club's "Nationwide Bookstore Employees' Recommended Comics of 2018" Both of this is not valuable at reception tbh, I prefer it to be removed.
• Gracie Qu from Anime Trending - Italize "Anime Trending"
• "By May 2018, the manga had 300,000 copies in circulation.[32] By December 2018, the manga had 1.05 million copies in circulation.[33] By October 2024, it had over 2.4 million copies in circulation.[34]" I think this should be not at reception section at all.

That's what I can the find the issues so far. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 10:43, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

Done. I added a sales subsection for the last one. Tintor2 (talk) 11:32, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

Did random spot checks at least 3-4 sources and it appears to be verified. I'm still not sold out to the popularity section, but that's only a minor issue anyway. Passing. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 12:06, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

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