Talk:Göran Lagerberg/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review a bit later. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

General

• Although optional, you can add {{short description}} and {{Use dmy dates}} at the top of the page. Infobox is properly set-up.
• Unlink the third-party link from Blond in the lede. The rest of the lede satisfies the criteria.
• "Always being musically interested, he started attending piano lessons at the age of six, attending the same school as Danne Larsson." → As a kid, he was interested into music and started attending piano lessons at the age of six, attending the same school as Danne Larsson.
• My recommendation would be to group a couple of sections: Under a new section called "Music career" you should put "Tages" (remove early years and later years subsections), "Blond", "1970s and 1980s" and "Grymlings".
• Missing end quote in the first sentence under "Early years" section. → "he was the only guy insane enough to play the washboard".
• "Unlike many other Swedish groups, who had one lead singer, the members of Tages were each was allowed at least one lead vocal per show, often harmonizing." → Unlike many other Swedish groups, who only had one lead singer, the members of Tages were each allowed to lead the vocals at least once per one show, often harmonizing.
• "...wasted on a flexi disc, thanks to Lagerberg's talent." – are you sure that this is meant to say wasted?
• Missing comma between November and Tages in the "In November Tages third studio album Extra Extra was released." sentence.
• Add "to" between Parlophone and expire in the "...allowing their contract with Parlophone expire..." sentence.
• Unbold "Blond" in the "Blond" section.
• Uncapitalize progressive rock in the "The group came out of the Mecki Mark Men and initially had a Progressive rock sound." sentence.
• Move the end quote on the left side of the period in the "..."one of the 50 best Svensktopp-songs of all time."" sentence.

Images

• File:Göran Lagerberg, sång.JPG is tagged as own work. Please find a source and if the image is suitable for Commons. If you don't, remove it from the article and nominate it for deletion.
• File:Henkan 70, 2015.jpg same issue.

Sources

• Move the only-remaining source from the lede to the third paragraph in the "Later years" section.
• "His work with the group would be postponed until he graduated in June 1965." – unsourced.
• Sources are alright. Discogs is tagged as unreliable since some complained that it is user-generated and not appropriate, if there are other reliable sources that can replace those two then find them, otherwise, they can be kept.

@VirreFriberg: I'm putting this article on hold for a week. If these issues get fixed I will promote it to GA. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 15:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

@Vacant0: Done. --VirreFriberg (talk) 12:09, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. I've removed the other image because the video isn't tagged with a CC 4.0 license. Vacant0 (talk) 12:20, 6 January 2022 (UTC)