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About word choice
editThe article, in my opinion, is written in good english. However, it would be nice if the author could diversify the text somewhat more by using terms such as "too" and "as well (as)" instead of only with the word "also" all the time. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.175.124.33 (talk) 20:27, 1 December 2010 (UTC)