Talk:Gang Bang (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:42, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• Add "recorded" in between "song" and "by"
• Shouldn't it be "singer and songwriter"?
• I don't think you have to include "Although not released as a single"
• American English: "criticised" → "criticized"
• "While working on her then-upcoming album" → You should probably include the name of the album since it isn't mentioned at all except in the lead
• I don't think "hits" is really encyclopedic
• "Among the songs recorded for the album, "Gang Bang" was confirmed to be part of the track listing." → When was it confirmed? And source?
• Since Tarantino has done a good handful of films (with almost all of them being blockbuster films), you probably can remove Pulp Fiction altogether; this would sound better in a magazine
• "Shot you dead, shot my lover in the head... I'm going straight to hell... I've got a lot of friends there," --> Should the "..." be "/" instead?
• "MTV News's" --> "MTV News'"
• "X. Alender" → Says differently in the source
• "The song received positive critical feedback." --> This sounds redundant to me :/
• Already linked The Guardian
• "Although it was not released as a single, " --> Same as before
• I don't think you need to link "setlist"
• "Good Morning America" should be italicized
• "Dexter" should be italicized

• Great job as always. On hold to address these few and minor issues. Carbrera (talk) 03:31, 7 September 2016 (UTC).

• Dealing with this today. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 10:24, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

• @Carbrera:, all done. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 09:50, 13 September 2016 (UTC)