Talk:Gasparo Cairano/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Johnbod in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Johnbod (talk · contribs) 14:47, 1 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

  • Clearly passes GA comfortably, & maybe ready for FA. The lead could/should be expanded as the article is so long. I'd move the "works" section up to below "Life", or squeeze it into the lead. Some paras are rather long. The text in the "Imperial effigies in Renaissance art" box is very long; it might be better to treat it as a conventional section. One day we will have more than a poor para on Italian Renaissance sculpture. Do I have to do anything else now? Can't understand the template at all. Johnbod (talk) 14:47, 1 April 2017 (UTC)Reply
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