Talk:Gate (Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 18:24, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Capitalize the 'y' in the song's infobox title please
• "Format" parameter: "Digital Download" --> "Digital download"
• You could probably link "Kisida in the "Writer" parameter to the group page for "Kisida Kyoudan & The Akebosi Rockets"
• You need to space "(2013)" evenly after the song "Strike the Blood"

Lead

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• Capitalize the 'y' in the song's bolded title please
• "It was released as the groups first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015." --> "It was released as the group's first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015."

Background and release

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• "It was released as the groups first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015." --> "It was released as the group's first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015."
• Just a suggestion: "Each format (apart from the digital release) includes three different artworks, all promotional images taken from the television series.[A] --> "Each format, apart from the digital release, includes three different artworks with all promotional images taken from the television series.[A]"

Reception

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• You can link "music critics" here to its respective article for "Music journalism"
• "The review concluded with the reviewer labelling it "exhilarating".[3]" --> "The review concluded with the reviewer labeling it "exhilarating".[3]"
• Please italicize "The Outerhaven"

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• "It debuted at number 17 on the Oricon Singles Chart, the groups lowest entry at the time.[12]" --> "It debuted at number 17 on the Oricon Singles Chart, the group's lowest entry at the time.[12]"
• Please italicize "Billboard"

Music video and promotion

• Absolutely great work! Fantastic :)

End of GA Review:

Great work as always! On hold for seven days to address the issues I brought up in the above review. Thanks so much! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:38, 28 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Done and dusted! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:12, 29 June 2016 (UTC)