Talk:Gene Cernan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Llammakey (talk · contribs) 09:55, 26 May 2017 (UTC)

Comments

• Apollo 17 should be linked at first mention in lead
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• In the "Early years" section, remove the definite article before USS Roanoake per WP:SHIPS
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• I would add a link to US Navy in that section.
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Link aircraft carriers
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• In the "Apollo program" section, would move LM link to first mention
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• overlink of Purdue University and Neil Armstrong
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Moon doesn't really need to be linked, and if you wanted to do it, at first mention
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Needs a cite on the second marriage
  •  Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Would also tidy up the references section - a lot of variation in the cites' date format, and general citation format
  • Date format commonized. Working on the others.
  • Okay I think I got it all. Kees08 (Talk)
• No DAB links, though I've got one dead link and a couple of redirects in the references - the references really need overhauling.
  • Technically this is not a GA criteria, but I can work on it since I am eventually taking this to FA. Kees08 (Talk)
  • Not seeing any dead links, just a couple false positives from the bot. Kees08 (Talk)
• As for prose - I get a copyvio warning using the tools, though that may be due to the large quote. Will need more experienced editors to help on this one Llammakey (talk) 09:55, 26 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Ok, I've sought guidance and since the copyvio warning is mainly based on the quote, I'm going to give the article a pass on that. Llammakey (talk) 12:04, 27 May 2017 (UTC)

@Llammakey: Let me know if there is anything else you want me to address. Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 22:01, 27 May 2017 (UTC)

• Nope. That's a pass. Congrats. Llammakey (talk) 00:49, 28 May 2017 (UTC)