Talk:General Data Protection Regulation/Archives/2015
Latest comment: 8 years ago by FabulousPhil in topic Tone
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Tone
This is a good start but the text is a little casual in tone and lacking in sources. I added links to docs but dont currently have time to carry out the major edits it really requires.