Talk:Genetic studies of Jews/Archive 10
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Recent edits by Skllagyook
Okay your last edits have some serious problems. First of all the study says that they they cluster on PCA “midway between europeans and middle easterners”, while you wrote this ambiguous “Mediterranean people”
second of all there are PCA results where AJ cluster much closer europeans like italians than ME as in lazaridis 2014, so the conclusion of goldestien study is not to be be generalized.
third of all, the Fst results is not “according to some studies”, it’s how it is in general, you won’t find any study showing a different result. ashkenazi jews are genetically closer italians and greeks than middle easterners, if you went to exploreyourdna.com and compared any ashkenazi jew sample from g25 to other samples, they always show much closer genetic distance with italians than middle easterners. I am okay with adding “according to some studies”, but only if you were somehow you were able to bring any single study that has ashkenazi jews having lower autosomal Fst value with levantines or middle easterners than italians Chafique (talk) 21:18, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
- I think those are fair points, and accurate, as far as I know. My issues with your edits were other than that (see my topic above). But I don't think we disagree. And I think I can edit my additions to fix the problems you pointed out. Skllagyook (talk) 21:28, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
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Reverted back the Criticism section. This section is sourced and quoted from articles. Stop interjecting you personal opinion here. Also citations in this section come from the parent article you're going to have to re-write the entire History section if you honestly believe this section is based on opinion because a source from that section is quoted in this section. Look, I understand that you personally have this believe and you have that right, but this should be based on scholarly sources not what you believe personally and that is what this section contains and quotes. I severely suggest you take a moment to remove yourself from the personal connection to this and then come back. You've engaged in edit warring and there is now a talk section on it as well a covering the injection of your personal opinions through misrepresentation of citations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Illyduss (talk • contribs) 19:47, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
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Inconsistency?
The lead contains the following line:
Behar and colleagues have remarked on an especially close relationship between Ashkenazi Jews and modern Italians.
But source 8 (Science) shows that it was a separate later study led by Martin Richards that concluded there was such a deep connection, and that Behar was actually less convinced by it. So it seems odd to attribute it to "Behar and colleagues". Prinsgezinde (talk) 08:13, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
"Hypotheses" section
Is this whole section just a refutation of the Khazar hypotheses based on genetics? And if so, does it need to be labelled as such? Or is it even needed here? Genetics and the Khazar theory is its own section on the Khazar hypothesis page. If this is just pure duplication on two separate pages, one of the versions (probably here, if this section is as specific to that page and its subject as it seems) should simply summarize the material and link to the main page on the topic. Iskandar323 (talk) 12:48, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- @Bobfrombrockley: You're reshuffling of this alerted me to this query again, so fyi. Iskandar323 (talk) 12:54, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- I think you might be right. It feels like it's spun off from somewhere. BobFromBrockley (talk) 17:38, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
Are Levites a "priestly class"?
Should "priestly class" be changed to "a class which claims to have been predominately helpers of priests, but includes also priests"? AltheaCase (talk) 17:47, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
- I would go with the description from our article Levites: "Jewish males who claim patrilineal descent from the Tribe of Levi". The fact that it's a claim and that the claim is a genetic one are more important than the historical roles held by the Tribe of Levi. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 18:33, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
- "Priestly class" is perfectly proper wording. We can get a clue from our well-sourced article about the Tribe of Levi:
- "According to the Bible, the Tribe of Levi is one of the tribes of Israel, traditionally descended from Levi, son of Jacob. The descendants of Aaron, who was the first kohen gadol (high priest) of Israel, were designated as the priestly class, the Kohanim."
- We can also get more clues from our article about Aaron#High Priest:
- That's pretty clear. Only the descendants of Aaron, thus including Levites, can be priests. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 19:09, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
References
- ^ Exodus 28:1
Title change suggestion
Could the title of this page please be changed to “Genetic Studies Of Jews” instead of “on”? It may seem minor, but “of” does not provoke the thought of the heinous experimentations of Mengele and others. Tumbleweed42AC (talk) 16:22, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- That does make sense to me. Let's see what other editors think. A title change is a very serious thing, so don't make such changes until a consensus has formed for the change. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 17:22, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- That's a good suggestion, the title should change. CGP05 (talk) 03:20, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
- seems ok to me Andrew Lancaster (talk) 06:33, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, very good. I'd often thought that this would be a better formulation.Nishidani (talk) 11:55, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
Biased lede
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Biased lead/lede ... "Jewish migration" indicates genetic studies are about "Expulsions and exoduses of Jews" Change this... Genetic studies of Jews are part of the population genetics discipline and are used to analyze the chronology of Jewish migration To this... Genetic studies of Jews are part of the population genetics discipline and are used to analyze Jewish ethnogenesis. See examples... https://www.journals.uchicago.edu/doi/abs/10.1086/702709 or search... The Geography of Jewish Ethnogenesis.pdf https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/ethnogenesis https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ethnogenesis#Jews ... this is also biased 2601:444:300:B070:E90B:1155:46C0:DBB0 (talk) 11:49, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
I have reverted a deletion of this thread because I do not see anything dramatic enough to justify that. Looking at the original which started it, things have gone towards an old circular discussion but I do wonder whether the IP was correct to suggest that our lead should not presuppose Jewish "expulsions and exoduses". I also don't like "ethnogenesis". Shouldn't it be something like "the ancestry of Jewish populations"?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 18:08, 6 May 2024 (UTC) |
Is this article about "Expulsions and exoduses of Jews"
With regards to a previous interrupted discussion one aspect which we still need to discuss is whether it is really correct to suggest that our lead should not presuppose Jewish "expulsions and exoduses". I also don't like "ethnogenesis". Shouldn't it be something like "the ancestry of Jewish populations"?" Comments please. Andrew Lancaster (talk) 20:52, 7 May 2024 (UTC) NOTE. This post has been rewritten after objections were raised. (Introductory discussion of recent context has been made deliberately vague. Main point is the same.)--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:28, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that the first sentence sounds a bit weird. We could it replace with something along the lines of
Population genetics research has been conducted on the ancestry of the Jewish people
. We could keep the wikilink to the exoduses and expulsions in the lede, as one of the topics of research. Alaexis¿question? 07:26, 11 May 2024 (UTC)- I am not totally clear what that would look like. It does not look like a very conventional way to open an article. I'll just make a proposal.
- Current text: '''Genetic studies of Jews''' are part of the [[population genetics]] discipline and are used to analyze the chronology of [[Jews|Jewish]] [[Expulsions and exoduses of Jews|migration]] accompanied by research in other fields, such as [[Jewish history|history]], [[Jewish languages|linguistics]], archaeology, and paleontology. These studies investigate the origins of various [[Jewish ethnic divisions]]. In particular, they examine whether there is a common genetic heritage among them. The [[medical genetics of Jews]] are studied for population-specific diseases.
- Proposed text: '''Genetic studies of Jews''' are pursued within the discipline of [[population genetics]] and are used to analyze the ancestry of [[Jews|Jewish]] populations, by looking at the similarities and differences between the [[genome]]s typically found within various [[Jewish ethnic divisions|Jewish]] and non-Jewish populations. On the one hand, these studies therefore complement other disciplines which study the past such as [[Jewish history|history]], [[Jewish languages|linguistics]], archaeology, and paleontology. On the other hand, such studies are used to study [[medical genetics of Jews|population-specific]] diseases.
- But in any case I think a minimum edit which is needed is that [[Expulsions and exoduses of Jews|migration]] should be replaced. I will adjust that already. However the logic is a bit twisted in the rest of the wording. Real scientists who study these things cannot just look for shared genetic heritage among Jewish groups. They will surely find something, but they won't be able to come to conclusions. (All human populations show evidence of shared genetic heritage.) They need to also look at non-Jewish groups, and they also need to look for differences, and not just what is shared. The readers are likely to need help to understand this when reading the mini reviews in the body, and this is a good place to make it clear?--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 11:28, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- OK, I was just commenting in a discussion at the Jews article talk page and now I see that collapsed thread, it seems that collapsing it might have been a bit premature, we need at least a cross check with the article Racial conceptions of Jewish identity in Zionism. Selfstudier (talk) 18:43, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- Just on the side issue, I believe we need to see the "premature collapse" as a valid clash between two WP priorities. Anyway, no one is denying that the lead, like everything on WP, can be improved.--Andrew Lancaster (talk) 19:14, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- OK, I was just commenting in a discussion at the Jews article talk page and now I see that collapsed thread, it seems that collapsing it might have been a bit premature, we need at least a cross check with the article Racial conceptions of Jewish identity in Zionism. Selfstudier (talk) 18:43, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- I am not totally clear what that would look like. It does not look like a very conventional way to open an article. I'll just make a proposal.